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Post by Trivium515 on Mar 4, 2009 17:05:27 GMT -5
A Life Too Late
As an ember turns to ashes in this evanescent game Never to burn as a vibrant crimson flame As a single snow flake melts in the sun before it hits the ground Like a bead of rain condemned to never dance its way on down Like a single second that you took for granted now is gone forever For Time I’ve found is impossible to tether Lives go on like stories never told Like flowers never opened and now it is too cold Hearts break but make no sound In the pound of a million others shattering all around Will you never see me standing here? Trembling in pain and fear But the world goes on as ignorant to my torment as can be And I will lay here in the past for you to never see…
..........Wrote it a while back, it's pretty Emo lol, but i thought I'd post it anyway
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Post by Lasher on Mar 4, 2009 20:28:22 GMT -5
Definitely a smidgen emo, Triv... but freakin awesome too. Very well formed... it's got uber flow to it. Pretty epic analogies as well. Vivid. I love it. Poems are supposed to be sorrowful, so you know... rock on, chica. ^-^ Thanks for havin the cajones to put it up.
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Post by MagnetMan on Mar 4, 2009 20:47:40 GMT -5
Lekker liedjie 515 A story never told A Ilikealot
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Post by bhrhrahraa on Mar 11, 2009 19:01:07 GMT -5
ooooo. MashALLAH. Awesome dude. Me likey.
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Post by lavender1 on Sept 21, 2009 20:12:59 GMT -5
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