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Post by know knot on Feb 10, 2008 19:09:10 GMT -5
this is an unfinished poem inspired by a dream i had a long time ago about the conflict in the middle east. Warblind
A young girl cries in fear In a city shattered and battle torn Her ash stained face streaked with tears With a baby in her arms newly born
In her heart the last vestige of hope dies Her mother and father lay dead Siblings still in bed no longer breathing Ripped apart by bullet head
The smoke covered sky glows red As houses burn to the ground Children cry in terror holding their bloody ears No longer able of hearing sound
Bloodied and torn she tries to run Battle rages and shots fill the air Before her eyes people fall to the gun Her world lost in the raging glare
Shell-shocked children shudder As tears work their way down their dirty faces Like the blood of their loved ones down the city gutter This endless demise of troubled races
The sound of death reigns overhead Ten ton bombs fall onto streets of pain Enemy machineguns spit out led And bullet shells fall like golden rain...a tad gloomy...
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Post by nickelfire on Feb 11, 2008 12:18:35 GMT -5
a tad gloomy... No kidding... very sad. Good though.
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Post by Trivium515 on Feb 11, 2008 16:26:38 GMT -5
Nice poem Know-knot. I could certainly feel the emotion behind it.
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Post by Lasher on Feb 14, 2008 20:19:51 GMT -5
I think that's pretty awesome... very dark. Some great imagery and analogy. Very visual.
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Post by lavender1 on Oct 7, 2009 10:21:34 GMT -5
follow up with a dream: deep blue shades
aren't these rules just there 2 b broken and monitors bluffing they are in control isn't the biggest share only token with prisoners toughing it out on parolespoem dedicated.. \!!
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Post by lavender1 on May 27, 2010 15:18:31 GMT -5
anything goes ~~~~ everything went
did crude poets emerge abroad alien strange and foreign to all that was our national pride
did crude poets arise from nowhere ex-imped by scientific standards and teachers as silent as anyone could become
did crude poets swamp our senses getting dull between duty to report and failure to answer
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