TarotDragon
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Post by TarotDragon on Feb 11, 2008 20:41:31 GMT -5
Silent Lament I feel the trembling in my bones A changing in the tones That my body sings I cannot fight what the moon brings
A writhing in my skin Welling of a soul from deep within Flaxen hair to brindled fur My change not to common cur
My visage to snarling jaw Hands and feet to padded paw As my body, my soul accepts this boon I howl unto the moon
Free at last from my human shell I run from this suburban hell Pavement fades to bush covered hill A rabbit spooks, its time for the kill
An open starlight night Has game fleeing in fright But this is not why I haunt the dark Must I make the confession that I am a lark?
I take this shape to feel the wind upon my face And the thrill of the chase But the kill is not what I need I have no reason to feed
The grass between my toes Scents tickling at my nose I frolic amid fallen leaves Hearing the singing of the trees
Here in my wolfen form I escape from human norm In wild places is where I’m supposed to be This shape the truthful me
All too soon moon is gone Chased away by the coming dawn Forced back to human confinement I alone cry in silent lament
Probably my first real attempt at writing poetry. Been told its a bit immature and its really not a style I feel comfortable in, but I wanted to do this story. Chose werewolfism because 1) I love wolves and 2) the symbolism of the shapeshift.
Kudos to everyone who showed their stuff before me cause I wouldn't have have had the guts to do so. ;D
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murex
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Post by murex on Feb 12, 2008 1:52:49 GMT -5
Good stuff.
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Post by Kwan Yu on Feb 12, 2008 17:55:21 GMT -5
Silent LamentIMy visage to snarling jaw Hands and feet to padded paw As my body, my soul accepts this boon I howl unto the moon This is hard to ignor
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Post by Trivium515 on Feb 12, 2008 19:24:46 GMT -5
Very good TD, I liked it alot.
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TarotDragon
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Post by TarotDragon on Feb 13, 2008 19:16:48 GMT -5
tank you!
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Post by Lasher on Feb 14, 2008 20:31:30 GMT -5
I love shape-shift stuff! Gets those primal goosebumps up. Very good. I'm definitely lycan it. (Ha ha! Lycan! Get it? )
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TarotDragon
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Post by TarotDragon on Feb 21, 2008 13:31:50 GMT -5
Very good. I'm definitely lycan it. (Ha ha! Lycan! Get it? ) Ha ha. Funny. Lycan. You Underworld nut. ;D
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Post by know knot on Feb 22, 2008 12:54:58 GMT -5
simply. awesome. good work TD.
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Post by lavender1 on Sept 2, 2009 15:30:34 GMT -5
it's rather fascinating. well written, kudos!
ps. think it may describe a parallel experience i had. thank you for sharing.
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